After the screening we gave out questionnaires for people to fill in.
Overall, we got an average score out of 10 of 8.19
When asked how they felt about the film
-8 out of 21 said it was very good
-13 out of 21 said it was good
Some of the improvements suggested were:
'the grainy shots in places'
'ending revealing the whole film being a dream sequence, bit cleche'
'Hint at plot/themes and twists rather than making it obvious'
Overall, the film was very well received by the people invited to the screening.
Monday, 14 May 2012
Thursday, 10 May 2012
Wednesday, 9 May 2012
Self-Assessment Essay
Interrogation
is a story of a young man who has been lead down a bad track by a combination
of peer pressure and bad decisions. The film is supposed to depict the
struggles that young men have with peer pressure and dealing with the fact that
it’s time to grow up. We wanted to create a film that could be influential and
relatable to students who were about to face the leap and join the real world.
One of the main influences to our film was the flashbacks from ‘Source Code’,
which split up the main narrative of the film and added a depth to the
structure, rather than it just being a linear timeline. I was appointed director of the film, Phil
Johnson was editor and as he was responsible for getting the final vision to
the screen, we decided he should also be an assistant director on set. Nathan
was originally given the role of Director of Photography and Camera Operator,
however, due to him showing a lack of enthusiasm and not showing up to the
majority of production meetings, we made a collective decision to give Rob
Hughes the position instead and have Nathan as a cameraman.
Once
we had decided on the idea for the project; Phil and I sat down to flesh out a
rough script. I think this stage of the process happened a lot quicker having
only two of us doing it, although we had had some input of ideas from Rob,
which we implemented. We then took our script to the whole group and made
changes accordingly. One of the biggest problems we faced in the planning
stages of the project was sourcing performers. In fact, this was a problem that
we took right up to the filming. We had such a problem sourcing extras; we had
to completely change the layout of our poker scene, as there weren’t enough
bodies to fill the whole room. I think this problem would have been easier to
resolve if there was a budget to pay the extras for their time. The other
problem I faced with using less skilled actors was them not remaining
professional whilst in the background of a shot. So there was several wasted
takes where some of the extras have started laughing or doing something
inappropriate. In terms of post-production, Phil did the majority of the
editing. One of the main issues he had was getting the sound right. This was
down to several factors, such as only using a mono microphone input, meaning
there was a dead channel that developed unwanted noise. The other issue was the
fact that we forgot to use a clapped board for the majority of the scenes so
syncing audio was an issue.
Overall,
I feel the project has gone well and the final outcome has got very good feedback
from people when screened. If I were to start the project again I would definitely
keep a closer eye on what shots are looking like, especially the dolly zoom
shots, as the moving dolly makes it hard to get a live feed from the camera. I
would also plan more time to brief the actors before we get to location, as I spent
a lot of time doing this on set which made it harder to look at the shots from
a technical point of you.
Friday, 4 May 2012
Treatment
Interrogation – Treatment
Interrogation is a story of a young man who has been lead
down a bad track by a combination of peer pressure and bad decisions. The
backbone of the story is an interrogation of Billy, who is struggling to
remember the events of the night before. As the plot unfolds the audience sees
flashbacks of the events that happened to get him in this position. There film
finished by revealing to the audience that this interrogation has been
happening in Billy’s head and he is in fact laid in a gutter. The plot depicts the struggle that young men
have with peer pressure and facing up to the fact that there not a teenager
anymore.
The film will open on Billy, who is tied down to a chair
looking a dazed and confused. A mysterious voice off camera starts
interrogating him and pressuring him to remember the events that have led to
him being here. The voice triggers a flash back of Billy at the start of the
night in his flat. The scene starts with him greeting his mates at the flat door;
at this point he is enthusiastic towards them and appears to be ready for a
good night out. When they get into the flat, Ruby is washing up and looks
annoyed at the boys. One of Ruby’s possessions is smashed, which triggers a
chat between Ruby and Billy, in which, Ruby tries to bring Billy back down to
earth and ground him in reality. This is undone by his mates who pull him back
towards the ‘fun’ living room. Billy finds himself back in the interrogation
room and looks even more tired and his shirt is less clean. The interrogator
(still off camera) starts questioning him again, triggering another flashback.
We now see Billy at a poker game in which, he appears to have a winning hand
and be in a betting competition with another player, who also seems to have a
winning hand. We see Billy go all in and as the dealer lays down the flop, he
slowly realises that he has lost to the opponent. We then see him storm out of
the room, followed by Geoff who is sat to his right. They enter the bar and sit
down with some shots to have a heart to heart chat. This ends with Geoff persuading
Billy to go out to a club and spend some of his overdraft. We go back to the
interrogation and Billy is now looking messed up with rips in his shirt etc.
The interrogator is getting angrier now and is shouting by the time Billy plunges
into his final flashback. We see him in a club, making his was round a few
different girls, before he settles on the girl in the stripy dress and they
make their way out of the club and start making out in the alleyway outside.
They are cut short by the girl’s real boyfriend punching Harry, knocking him to
the ground. We are back in the interrogation room where Billy is realizing what
he has done wrong. We emerge back in the alley. It’s now morning and Ruby had
found Billy and is reassuring him as he apologizes.
The main style of the film is in the Interrogation scenes as
that is the backbone to the story. The lighting on the subject is harsh and the
background is in complete darkness to give the impression that he is in a void.
A lot of the visual style of the film was achieved using in-camera fx; such as
the slow shutter speed in the club scene, which gave the scene a look of
drunken confusion. We also used a dolly zoom shot in the casino scene to exaggerate
the expression on Billy’s face when he realizes he’s lost all his money. The
earlier flashbacks also use a variety of warm gels to contrast with the later
scenes.
Our target audience is students or people who have not long
since ben students, aiming to encourage make the film relatable to them and,
maybe even encourage them to grow up a little bit.
Promo and premiere
In order to get some feedback from a fresh audience and to allow the cast to see the film we have decided to organize a screening of the film on a big screen with a proper PA system. Phil has produced a promo image to advertise the premiere.
Editing
As Phil (the editor) had his own copy of Final Cut Pro, he was able to get working on a rough cut fairly quickly. Me and Rob did have several meetings with Phil to check on the progress and offer constructive criticism. Unfortunately, Nathan was not available for any of the editing review sessions, so he has not had chance to offer an opinion on the edit. On Sunday 29th April Phil invites us to see the full film with all of his colour correction and effects. We were both taken aback by how well the film flows and how good the edit looks and other than a few minor changes we thought it was ready for a public screening.
Shoot day 3
Me and Harry got to location at about 9.00 and set up the set for
the interrogation scene. Rob and Phil turned up about 9.45 and after setting up
the cameras we started filming with Harry. This scene was fairly easy to get
right as there was only one actor to direct. Phil fed Harry his cue lines of
that the spacing would flow well.
Nathan turned up
on location at about 11AM, which meant I was able to focus more on directing.
We finished
shooting the interrogation scene at about 12, and as Phil had planned the
extras from 11.30 they were ready to go straight into the club scene, which was
in the same location.
While Harry was
removing the fake blood from his face, we set up the lighting which came from a
T-bar with some moving disco lights on them.
This coupled with
the slow shutter speed on the XM2s gave the look that the scene was
clustered and 'club like'.
I called a Rap on
shooting at 12.45 and we all had to go to out 1PM lecture.
At 3PM we went
back to the location to record the V.O. audio and pack down the equipment.
This took about 30 mins.
We then took out
main actor to the bar for a quick 'RAP' drink and then took the equipment
back to the kit stores before it closed.
Later that evening
me and Phil met up in the VFX lab to get the footage off the DV tapes and check
the footage in the process.
Shoot day 2
Due to lateness of the previous night and the amount of time Harry
spent to do his hair in the morning, we didn't get to the Hubs till about 9.15,
shortly followed by Phil, Nathan and Rob.
We had set up our
poker scene by 10.15 and unfortunately the majority of the extras had
not shown up. The technical crew at the Hubs had been very kind in setting up
some overhead lights in the rig so that we could reduce the amount of
lights needed on the floor.
At about 10.30
Phil suggested that we change the scene so that it only involved one
poker table and the bar was in the other room. We all agreed that this would
work better as we didn't have enough extras to fill the room. The
first shot we got on was the Dolly zoom reaction shot when billy loses his
hand. Unfortunately, due to the moving dolly it was not practical to have
the AV monitor cable connected to the camera, meaning that I was unable to tell
whether the shot had worked or not. This proved to be a mistake as, despite 10
mins of practice, and 7 takes Nathan didn't manage to get a smooth shot that
was good enough to sell the effect, meaning Phil didn't have a lot of options
when it came to editing. The rest of the shots went fairly smoothly, however,
continuity when we were resetting was an absolute nightmare, as all the chips
and cards had to be reset for every take.
We finished
filming the poker at about 13.30 and because we only had the room till 15.00 we
had to go straight into the Bar scene. As we had set up the bar earlier
that day we were able to get through the shoot fairly quickly. We had a bit of
a problem with the audio in this scene as the bar fridges were very load an
appeared on the tape.
We finished
filming at about 15.30. During the pack down of the equipment,
while Phil went home to get changed and get the stuff for the evening
shoot, Nathan informed me that he was going home and was not going home.
This meant that we would be a cameraman and team member down for the
second evening shoot in a row.
At about 5PM we
went to the alleyway and filmed the morning alley scene. This scene may have
been a little bit rushed as there was a rain cloud coming over. We finished the
scene just as the rain started, which meant a quick pack down and getting
the equipment back into the dryness of the Hubs.
After an evening
meal at the Pub and ensuring the main actor had had a few hours break, we met
up in the Hubs to brief the actors on the evening shoot before moving to the
location.
As Harry Lee is
trained in stage combat, he briefed Lawrence on how to punch correctly without
the danger of breaking his nose.
When we got to
location we did a rehearsal, expecting the making out scene to take a
while to get right. We were all surprised at how passionate the
kiss looked. So much so that I forgot to call cut.
We finished the
scene at about 22.00 and moved the equipment back to Phil's overnight.
Shoot day 1
The day started a little bit later than planned, I got top the kit
store at 12.30 to start our production meeting. It was at this point I realized
that, Nathan hadn't Pre-booked any of the kit. While we were lucky in the fact
that all the kit we required was still available; the performance studio that
we had planned to shoot in was fully booked for all the shooting days. This
meant we would have to find another location on the day.
Our Lead actor,
had rang me up the night before, explaining that he had been required to work
in York until 5. This paired with the fact that
we didn't have a suitable location, meant that we would
have to change the schedule.
Rob turned up at
about 1pm; however, kit stores had closed for lunch, so we decided to go to the
Hubs location to see if we could use it for a replacement to the performance
studio. Phil joined us at about 2pm at which point we headed back over to the
kit store to collect the kit.
Unfortunately the
weather was absolutely terrible, when we had got all
the equipment to Phil's flat (closest to locations) we made the
decision that the it was too wet to go ahead with the outside alley shoot.
We decided to
bring forward the interior flat shoot. This proved to be
a logistical nightmare as all the extras
were prepared for Thursday night, and the location had not
been prepared. We left it to Phil to sort out the extras and i went home to
prepare the buffet for the next day’s shoot.
I got to Phil's
for about 6PM, to find him setting up the room for the shoot. Our
main actor had been delayed due to the weather so we had a full 2 hours to
dress the set and.
When Harry got to
the set we quickly briefed him on the situation and then the scene. Having had
chance to learn his lines on the train, we were able to start shooting almost
straight away.
Because we had to
change the scene so drastically I had to think on my feet and direct
the actors, while making sure that the changes we were making would still work
with the plot of the film.
Due to the late
start to the shoot, we didn't get finish the filming till 23.30 and by the time
we packed down it was passed 12.
Poker Research
Monday 16th April
Tonight we set up
a poker game for the cast and crew; this was largely to teach everyone how to
play poker. This proved to be very useful as it ensured the cast could play the
game ion a believable way. It also gave us a chance to discuss the best way to
film a poker game.
The cash game made
us realize how different people play when they are betting
with their own money. Even a game with a £5 buy in made people play
as if their life savings were on the table. The game ended with Phil (who was
£20 up) getting drown into a hand with Lawrence and with a pot of
about £40 lost his profit.
Day by Day checklist
Wednesday 18th April
Afternoon
Shoot- Interrogation
-2x XM2s
-2x Tripods
-2x Monitors
-1x Dolly
-1x Dodo light
pack
-1x Reflector
-1x Chair
-3x shirts
-1x fake blood
Crew roles
Simon- Director
Phil- AD and Sound
Nathan- Camera
Operator
Rob- Second Camera
Operator
Evening Shoot-
Alleyway
-2x XM2s
-2x Tripods
-1x Dolly
-1x Reflector
-2x shirts
-1x fake blood
Crew roles
Simon- Director
Phil-Camera/ Sound
Nathan- N/A
Rob- Second Camera
Operator
Thursday
19th April
Morning
Shoot- Casino/ Bar
-2x XM2s
-2x Tripods
-2x Monitors
-1x Dolly
-2x Dodo lightpack
-1x Reflector
-3x Poker Tables
-3x shirts
-Bar Bottles
Crew roles
Simon- Director
Phil- AD and Sound
Nathan- Camera
Operator
Rob- Second Camera
Operator
Night
Shoot- House interior
-2x XM2s
-2x Tripods
-2x Monitors
-2x Dolly
-2x Dodo light
pack
-1x Reflector
-1x reflect media
-1x shirts
-Set props
Crew roles
Simon- Director
Phil-Camera/Sound
Nathan- N/A
Rob- Second Camera
Operator
Friday 20th
April
Morning
Shoot- Club
-2x XM2s
-2x Tripods
-2x Monitors
-2x Dodo lightpack
-1x Reflector
-1x shirts
-Bar Bottles
-T-bar
-Moving head
lights
Crew roles
Simon- Director
Phil- AD and Sound
Nathan- Camera
Operator
Rob- Second Camera
Operator
//These are the
lists that me and Phil came up with in our production meeting in our production
meeting on Thursday 17th April and had change slightly by the time we
came to shoot
Wednesday, 2 May 2012
Shooting Schedule- as of Monday 16th April
Wednesday 18th April
12.00- meet
outside Stores for a final production meeting to make sure all crew are
fully prepared
12.30-
Collect equipment from stores
13.00- Rob and
Phil top start setting up for interrogation scene, while me and Nathan move Kit
to location
14.00- Shoot
starts with Harry Lee filming interrogation scenes
17.00- Break for
Tea
18.00- Set up
starts for alley way scene (morning after)
19.00- Alleyway
morning scene
20.00-Break
21.00-Alleyway
night scene
22.30-End of Day
Thursday
19th April
9.00- Start
setting up at Hubs for poker scene
10.00- start
briefing actors
10.30- Casino
Scene
13.00- Lunch
14.00- Bar Scene
15.00-Break for
Rest
17.00- start
setting up Phil's Flat
20.00- Flat Scene (int)
22.00- Flat Scene (ext)
22.30- Pack Down
Friday 20th
April
9.00- Start
setting up club scene
10.00- Brief
actors
10.30- club scene
//Times subject to
change
Shot List
Scene One
Shot 1 - Extreme Close up on Billy's face
Shot 2 - Medium shot
Shot 3 - Medium (Side) shot, Struggling
Shot 4 - Close up of tied hands
Shot 5 - Close up on Billy's face
reacting to door
Scene Two
Shot 1 - Extreme Wide (panning - Right to
left) shot
Shot 2 - Wide shot entering the building
Shot 3 - Medium shot of Ruby washing
dishes
Shot 4 - Medium shot in front of kitchen
door
Shot 5 - Close up of Billy looking at
Ruby
Shot 6 - Over shoulder of Billy to Ruby
glaring at him
Shot 7 - Close up of ornament smashing
Shot 8 - Medium shot of friend
apologising
Shot 9 - Over shoulder of Billy's lines
Shot 10 - Close (SIde) up of Ruby pissed
off
Shot 11 - Medium shot of ruby, Billy
entering kitchen
Shot 12 - Close up of Billy's lines
Shot 13 - Over Over shoulder of Billy to
Ruby
Shot 14 - Close up of Ruby's lines
Cut A way shots
- Guy sitting down, opening beers
- general drinking
- Close up of dish washing
- GREEN SCREEN
Scene Three
Shot 1 - Close up on Billy's face - Dolly
diagonal
Shot 2 - Medium Shot - Dolly diagonal
reverse
Shot 3 - Close up on Billy's face -
Stationary
Scene Four
Shot 1 - Dolly shot following the actors
from the side
Shot 2 - Dolly shot from behind showing
Billy and the Bin
Shot 3 -
reverse dolly shot with pan
Shot 4 - Wide shot - pan. Actors sitting
down, buying in
Shot 5 - REACTIONS (Close ups and Medium
shots)
Shot 6 - CHIPS
Shot 7 - CHIP TRICKS
Shot 8 - Hands
Shot 9 - Medium shot of billy pushing in
all his chips
Shot 10 - Close up of opponent calling
Shot 11 - Close up on Billy worried
Shot 12 - Medium shot of dealer
announcing winner
Shot 13 - Doll zoom on Billy losing.
Shot 14 - medium shot of Blaine and Geoff
at the bar, Billy in the background walks towards them
Shot 15 Close up on Billy
Shot 16 - Close up on Geoff
Shot 17 - Close up on Blaine
Shot 18 - over shoulder of Geoff to
barman
Shot 19 - Close up of drinks
Scene Five
Shot 1 - Wide angle on Billy
Shot 2 - medium side shot of billy
struggling - focus pull to his arm
Shot 3 - Medium Shot of Billy
Shot 4 - hero shot - close up
shot 5 - Close up
Shot 6 - Close up looking down of billy
screaming
Scene Six
SHUTTER SPEEDS!
Shot 1 - Close up, dancing - Handheld
Shot 2 - Medium shot -waist height - Chloe grinding on Billy
Shot 3 - Close up on Billy downing drinks
Shot 4 - Close up on Billy laughing
Shot 5 - close up on Blaine laughing
Shot 6 - Close up on Chloe bum squeeze
Shot 7 - close up on Billy and Chloe
close together
Shot 8 - Wide shot, Billy and Chloe
appear round the corner
Shot 9 - Close up of Billy and Chloe
kissing - focus pull to boyfriend
Shot 10 - Over shoulder of boyfriend
walking and punching Billy
Shot 11 - Close up on Billy's face
falling towards the ground (Slow mo - high shutter speed)
Scene Seven
Shot 1 - Close up on Billy looking up
Shot 2 - Close up on Billy moving around
with him
Shot 3 - Overhead shot of Billy looking
around
Shot 4 - Close up of billy looking around
Shot 5 - medium shot of billy breaking
free and getting slapped
Scene Eight
Shot 1 - close up of Billy's face being
slapped
Shot 2 - Hero shot of Ruby - close up
Shot 3
- Dolly shot pulling back
Location Scouting
Location Scouting
Hubs
The main location we have settled on for
the club, bar and casino scene is The Hubs. I have booked A-Pod as it
seemed to be the most suited to the needs of the script. There are several
advantages to using this as a location for the film; the room has a full
lighting rig with several fixtures and moving lights (which will make it easy
to light the scenes, without having to worry about getting lights in shot), i
am also trained to use the lights, as well as having contacts in the venue that
will work for food :-), the room also has a built in bar on one side, but it’s
a blank enough canvas to film the other scenes.
The room does have some quite noticeable defects,
such as holes in the wall; however, I hope to solve this by hanging drapes over
them. The other main problem is that the bar is not set up meaning that we will
have to provide our own bottles and drinks etc. to make it look like a working
bar.
Alley
We decided that the main aspect that would make the alley suitable
for the scene would be the light conditions as we want the scene to be light
enough to be seen on camera. Because of this me and Phil waited until it was
getting dark and went for a scouting session with Phil's camera. The first
alley way we came across was Brown Ln near Hallam Union. This proved to be a
lucky find as it was well lit by street lamps and it was out of the way of the
main road which would make it easier to film on.
Most of the other alleys we found were too dark or they were
too open which wasn't the look we were going for.
THE
FLAT
As we were having
problems finding a house that would be both suitable and available
for the filming, we decided we would alter the scene of that we could film in
Phil's flat. However, we don't want it to look like student accommodation,
so we will have to do a lot of set dressing (and cleaning) to make it look
homely.
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